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L.E.G.O.L.A.S.

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L is for Loyal,
   True to your cause.
E is for Errant,
   Brave without pause.
G is for Gorgeous,
   With your dreamy looks.
O is for Omen,
   You read without books.
L is for Limpid,
  Eyes like deep pools.
A is for Arrows,
   Your battling tools.
S is for Sacrifice,
   Given up by fools.

Legolas you’re handsome,
   Loyal and true.
There is no other,
  Quite like you.

Truthful, and farsighted,
  The signs you can read.
Helping to keep safe,
  and so, jointly, succeed.
From Lord Of The Rings - Kat's 'Cootsie'.
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Okay so let's take a few minutes out from my uploading spree to give a lil bit of feedback on this poem you did about Cootsie ^^ or Legolas, as other people would say.

I'm open about the fact that I really do not like poetry in general, but I like this ^^ You managed to sum him up quite nicely with those few letters, which can be quite hard to do.

It must be said that I'm a little disappointed in the fact that this is the first comment or anything on this poem though, so I would encourage some people to wonder over and give a lil look at this. Otherwise, very nice! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>